Why Readers Pass On Your Script (Nine Reasons, In Order)

The pass happens earlier than you think

Coverage readers carry a stack. They are not looking for a reason to stop — the stack supplies that — they are looking for a reason to continue. The decision usually forms between pages ten and twenty, and it is almost never about a single bad scene. It is about a pattern the opening establishes.

The nine, in the order they appear

Ranked by frequency across the reads Don Chuy has scored, each with the fix that addresses it directly.

• 1. The opening does not pose a question. Fix: give page one something unresolved a reader must stay to settle.
• 2. The protagonist wants nothing yet. Fix: move the want earlier, even in an unrefined form.
• 3. Dialogue explains rather than negotiates. Fix: give the other character a reason to refuse.
• 4. Every scene resolves. Fix: leave one thing unpaid at the end of each scene.
• 5. The antagonist has no case. Fix: write their version of the story until it is persuasive.
• 6. Presentation signals amateur. Fix: paragraphs under four lines, parentheticals cut in half.
• 7. The middle is unpowered. Fix: raise the price of each attempt rather than the volume.
• 8. The concept is familiar without a new angle. Fix: name the one thing only your version does.
• 9. Length outside the expected range. Fix: enter late, leave early, cut travel scenes.

The one you cannot rewrite your way out of

Number eight. If the concept has no angle of its own, better execution buys you a polite pass instead of a fast one. That is the note to solve before another draft, and it is the only one on this list worth restarting for.

Find out which one is yours

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